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Play (one act) - E-mail to Japan

Started by Ashi Feb 2, 2014. 0 Replies

If any of you can spare the time and critique, I'm intending to submit this to a local playhouse for their call for one-act plays by the end of the month.  It's more like a monologue with most of the…Continue

SWAK - 230 words

Started by Lady Hazmat. Last reply by Lady Hazmat Feb 1, 2014. 3 Replies

My story, Alternative Medicine, is on temporary hold, but here is some flash I'm considering submitting to a few literary journals after a bit of polishing. Your thoughts are much…Continue

Let's get this beta party re-started!! Draft: The Exceptional Belly (1,000 words)

Started by G.B. White. Last reply by G.B. White Jan 8, 2014. 4 Replies

Hey all,We might as well get this up and running again.  I'm perfectly willing to be the first blood sacrifice, so here's a draft of an approximately 1000 word story.  I'd originally drafted it for a…Continue

Prologue (work in progress)

Started by Pim Spierenburg. Last reply by Pim Spierenburg Jan 4, 2014. 6 Replies

So I finally put myself to it to upload something from my ongoing story, which stands at 105K words and counting. Below you'll find the prologue (sorta). I'm not sure whether this is a good start,…Continue

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Title Advice?

Posted by Daniel Hale on December 14, 2015 at 18:29 0 Comments

I just completed, as near as I can tell, my first book: a collection stories disguised as a novel. I do currently have a working title that I was initially happy with, BUT it may now be too obscure or inapplicable.

The title as it is now is "The Psalterdemalion." This is a combination of two of my favorite words: Psalter, which is a small book of psalms, and Tatterdemalion, which is a man dressed in multicolored rags and tatters. My thinking was that the man character, a story thief,…


A Memory Resides In Soho

Posted by Ronnie Capaldi on November 24, 2015 at 21:06 0 Comments

A Memory Resides In Soho

On the 1st August 2015 a special night had arrived for seventy-five year old Robert Harris and his seventy-two year old wife Barbara.  Robert was nattily dressed in a blue suit and Barbara looked elegant in a long flowing red and black flowery dress. They were in the heart of the…


Final Stretch for my First Project

Posted by Daniel Hale on November 16, 2015 at 2:41 0 Comments

So I've got my stories together for my first collection, and am currently working on the connecting narrative. I haven't even thought yet how I'm gonna get this published. Gotta start thinking what I need to do. 


Posted by Ronnie Capaldi on November 12, 2015 at 17:40 0 Comments


Mark stood on a sea cliff top. A wave below roared in and sprayed out a ferocious impact. Its retreat left a glistening carpet of foamy shale. To his left, a slender figured girl appeared, dressed only in a skimpy black nightie. Her blonde hair fell over her face. Scarlet lips whispered to him,…


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