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Parts of Blame by C.E.Schwilk

It was the shape of my mouth, you said, that earned me your resentment and loathing. I would try and please you, contort my lips or hide behind my hands when talking; spare us both the pain in your eyes.

As I grew, my hands were now to blame, reminding you again of what was never my fault. I could not hide those and cutting them did not change them enough.

Hate your religion, hate your upbringing, hate the rapist – but I didn’t ask to be born nor kept. That was your decision.


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Comment by Lindsay Bamfield on September 8, 2013 at 19:05

Wow, That really is a winner. Congratulations.

Comment by Ashi on September 8, 2013 at 20:03
Sheesh, that one really hits. Very emotional. You can feel the narrator's sadness and anger over what they couldn't control. Congratulations on the win!
Comment by Ann K. Boyer on September 8, 2013 at 22:47
Absolutely beautiful. It really is a great piece of emotional writing. I'm very happy for your much deserved win! :)
Comment by KM Zafari on September 9, 2013 at 1:49
I can definitely see why this won. Great job! Very moving.
Comment by Essvari on September 9, 2013 at 14:43

Absolutely arresting... dark and morbid with a sense of detached fire in it.. 
Congrats for an incredible story..

Though the emotion behind the words hurt for a long time.. 

Time for healing...everywhere

Comment by C.E. Schwilk on September 30, 2013 at 4:59

Thank you SO much, everyone! I almost didn't submit this. LOL This had been a longer piece that I had workshopped a long time ago, but never quite satisfied with the outcome. I didn't know if I'd be able to tighten it up enough for this competition. :)

Thank you, thank you!

Comment by Veronica Tuggle on January 11, 2014 at 20:59

This is a masterpiece. The only reason I signed up to this site was so I could tell you, "This is a masterpiece."

I will be participating around the site now that I am signed up, but it was this piece that inspired me.

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