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Jay had grown up used to adoring looks and doting smiles.  Big blue eyes, a halo of blonde curls and the cutest little dimple, they all said he was sure to be a real heartbreaker.  Sometimes you find your career path mapped out for you from a very young age; some things are meant to be and Jay just went with it.

His looks got him everything he ever wanted; nobody denied him.  He lived up to the early predictions and collected many a heart down the years.

A song on the radio caught his attention, ‘A good heart these days is hard to find …’

Jay hummed along, a slight smile playing at the corner of his lips; unlike the singer he had no such difficulty, he knew exactly where to find the desired organ.  He opened his cabinet and gazed at its contents before taking down one of the jars. Within its crystal confines, a crimson mass floated in formaldehyde.  This particular specimen was his favourite.  Ellie had wanted to be his number one and Jay had been happy to oblige.

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Comment by Shakes on March 19, 2014 at 20:50

Oh, such sweet brilliance. I absolutely love this. Nothing else to say really. Perfect.

Comment by Steph Ellis on March 19, 2014 at 21:54
Thank you for the kind comment,really appreciated.
Comment by Meredith Loughran on March 24, 2014 at 23:59

Oooh, I want to know more!  Was it murder?  Is he a doctor?  Does he have a vast collection or just the one heart's desire?  (sorry)  LOL

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