Hey!! What's the story?

You don’t really believe they’re going to let the world come to an end, do you?

Think on it...

By ‘they’ I mean the elite, the rich and the powerful, the intelligentsia; the ten percent of the population who own ninety percent of the world’s wealth, resources and power. Of course they won’t, they aren’t stupid. They won’t let what they’ve got go.

I know, I know ... global warming, exponential population growth and deforestation, the threat of pandemic, war and famine. What can they do about it? They’re as helpless as you and I. Or are they?

Do you not think these people, men and women who control the world and have the most powerful brains, organisations and technology at their disposal; do you not think they haven’t already figured out the solution? Put it into effect...

Of course they have!

The problem is people. There are just too many of you. Humankind is a plague on the world like no other; eating up its resources, space, polluting the air and killing Gaia. You are the scourge.

And so they will kill you.

Already they are killing you...

Not by war, they might lose and it’s bloody, risky. Impossible to get everyone involved and there are just too many people now. World war is no use. It destroys the land as well as the people and they’re clever. They want the world for themselves.

No, it’s a virus.

Already they have seeded it, planted it so there is no escape. And Ebola has nothing on this. It is already in your blood, dormant and waiting to take you down. It waits for the trigger that they will pull. Don’t believe me?

Test it out.

Check your fingers, and I mean really check them. Relax and hold them out, feel what’s flowing underneath. Can you feel it, a faint tingling; a sensation that makes you want to scratch at your scalp, at your body or the back of your hand.


Then you have it.

It’ll be quick though. Within a day of them pulling the trigger and your temperature rising just two degrees you’ll be dead. I’d like to say it will be painless, but it won’t. You will pass with the taste of blood and bile in your mouth, every orifice leaking liquid. You will be contorted in pain, the tears streaming down your face as you scream for the release and embrace of death. You will welcome it.

Young, old, man and woman alike; all of you!

Death will know no boundaries. Billions will fall victim in India, China and Africa, the unwanted of Europe, Asia and the Americas; countries decimated and finally devoid of the plague that is you. And you will be as a number among the billions. No more and no less. Forever remembered and always forgotten.

And they, the enlightened, will be left. Civilisation will continue, life will continue and the world will be safe.

It will just be without you...



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Comment by Mark Cassell on October 26, 2014 at 16:03

Man, you have me checking out my fingertips... :-D

Comment by Paul Jameson on October 26, 2014 at 21:19

Marvellous :)

Comment by Shakes on October 27, 2014 at 17:13

The Georgia guidestones brought horribly to life. Too close to reality I fear. Well written.

Comment by Paul Jameson on October 27, 2014 at 18:33

Thanks Shakes :) Really appreciate that - was experimenting so worried whether or not it would work o.O 

Comment by Elliot Black on November 1, 2014 at 9:32

Really enjoyed, and really original. Well done mate 

Comment by Paul Jameson on November 1, 2014 at 12:19

Thanks Elliot :) Really appreciate that mate :)

Comment by Ronnie Capaldi on November 2, 2014 at 16:14

Interesting! and yes I can honestly say I was rubbing at my fingertips!. that was such a great idea! Made the story for me.

Comment by Paul Jameson on November 3, 2014 at 12:48

Thanks Ronnie :) Really chuffed it made you do that :))

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