Hey!! What's the story?
This was my last 99fiction entry. Its pretty different from what I normally do, and I'm not sure of the quality and how I actually feel about it.
But its posted below for any feedback!
This is the third time I've visited this place; the first was the day I met you, the second was the day we married and now today, the day you've left my life.
I'm pushing my clenched fist into the sand with every ounce of strength I have; bowing my head, and let the sadness wash over me.
The memories have taken hold. Their fingers are squeezing my throat, and their faces are glaring, open mouthed at me.
I want to have never known you; to have an empty space inside me now, replacing those memories.
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